Names, characters, places, and incidents either are products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. No part of this publication may be reproduced in any form or by any means, including scanning, photocopying, or otherwise without prior written permission of the copyright holder. Published by Samantha Rindfuss Schwertfeger at SmashwordsĪll Rights Reserved. Read moreĬopyright © 2014 By Samantha Rindfuss Schwertfegerīook Cover Illustrations by Somnath Chatterjee of dotpixel.in There is too much good children's literature out there to spend any time on low quality writing.

The book could be re-written to be a good one but as it is, I would avoid it at all costs. It reads like it was written by a child without much experience in writing.The story itself has potential but it's not worth wading through the whole book just to see how it all ends. But imagine if you had to listen to someone tell you a story and mention every tiny piece of dialogue that anyone in the story happened to have, even the most mundane bits. There is a lot of dialogue between all the characters, a lot of it very tedious. Besides the missing punctuation and a few spelling errors that get in the way, the text is just not interesting.

I will not be reading Andy the Spider out loud to anyone. I generally stick with classic literature for children or books that are entertainingly written or have an interesting story. I frequently read children's books for myself or when I read them out loud to my six year old.

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